Wednesday, 3 October 2012

Group work from first session: Looking at 3 act structure


Setting: Low Fantasy
Character – Priest or Monk, Brother Bernard, on a pilgrimage from the British Isles to the Vatican. Sees horrors done in the name of the church in war torn France during the 100 years war.
1st Part
1st act, leaves from Canterbury. Optimistic about faith and pilgrimage, diary entry from at the beginning while still at the monastery. Another diary entry on the boat to France, hears of evil done by nobles in the name of god and money being used for war and not to help starving peasants. Final entry of act one, Bernard witnesses first major atrocity at the port from which he disembarks the ship.
2nd Act
Bernard witnesses yet more atrocities done in the name of God. He begins to question his faith due to what he sees. Obstacles on his path whilst walking through war torn France. Arrives at a church in a rural French town, Priest reassures him of god’s work until he sees the priest’s own corruption.
3rd Act
Goes to town under attack by the Priest’s forces. Joins peasants in battle, ambiguous ending.


1st Entry
13th of the Month of July in the Year of our Lord 1247
Today, I have been set with a grand assignment from his holiness, Brother Superior Jon. I am to head to the Vatican in order to further my studies into the holy lands and the word of god. I leave this day, and leave behind me, my life in the monastery.

2nd Entry
6th of the Month of August in the Year of our Lord 1247
Today, whilst I cross the channel between Britain and France, I heard tell of acts of slaughter committed by nobles charged with the defence of the smallfolk. They sit in banquet whilst their people starve and blasphemously hide their deed ‘neath the cloak of faith. These are dark days, the faith of the people is shaken, I shall prey for their souls this night.



3rd Entry
12th Month of August in the Year of our Lord 1247
Dear Lord, today my faith has been shaken unto its foundations. I witnessed the work of the devil masquerading under the banner of justice, three maidens burnt at the stake for witchcraft, with nary a shred of evidence. I beseech thee lord, guide these lost sheep back into the light of your flock.

4th Entry
1st September
I have today taken to rest under the generosity of Pere Jacques at his parish grounds in Reims. Jacques has assuaged my fears concerning the acts of brutality which have cast a shadow over my soul. Je has confirmed the righteousness and truth of these actions and the piousness of the men that committed them.

5th Entry
4th September
I have this day renounced my faith, not to our lord, but unto the foul men that do evil in his name. The wicked, false Priest, Jacques, who sullied the word of god with orders of the slaughter of innocents, has utterly shaken my faith. I overheard a knight, and Jacques speak of a town not far, Guignicourt, the famished people there, with children dying of hunger in their parents arms were unable to pay the tithe to the church and knights. The false priest, unwilling to help, has ordered the knights to purge the town of their sinful ways. I will leave the church on the morrow to aid and protect these people to the best of my abilities.

6th Entry
6th September
Today I likely go to my death, for the cause is hopeless. These people have nothing, not even the weapons to defend themselves. I am not skilled with blade, yet these people look to me to lead them. I cannot lead them through strength, though my faith may warm their souls in their hour of greatest need. Bless us this day Father, and welcome those of us that fall into the light of your kingdom.